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The ABC of Communication
« on: December 20, 2011, 10:24:07 AM »

 
 
 
Write to Communicate, Not to Impress





When I was in school, the rule was “Write to communicate, not to impress”.


The core thought is that the prime goal of communication is to alter perceptions.


Perceptions are the sum of all our ideas about something. It may be something in the immediate present. It may be something in the past. It can also be something in the near or distant future.


Three yardsticks help us to communicate effectively.


1.      Accuracy: State facts and give references. When making a claim, always provide proof.


2.      Brevity:  Be as brief as possible. This is insurance against nit picking critiques. The less you write the less chance you are giving critics to pick on you.


3.      Clarity: Be clear about what you want to say. “It was a sunny day” is a clear statement. “The weather was fine” leaves it to the reader’s idea of what fine weather is.


These three yardsticks, together, make the ABC of Communication.


Accuracy and Brevity contribute to Clarity. Using familiar words are a big help. So are short sentences, focused on a single idea.Two, even three or four short sentences are better than a single long sentence.









Most long sentences can be broken up into two or more short ones. Take the last three sentences of the third paragraph for example. When I began to write this piece it was single sentence, “
It may be something in the immediate present, it may be something in the past, and it can also be something in the near or distant future.[font='times new roman']” On review, I broke it up into three short ones. These short sentences make for easier understanding. The lesson we learn is; avoid conjunctions wherever you can.  [/font][/size]Place the subject and the verb as close as possible in your sentence.  Take these two examples.

1.“The engine springs into life with a muted roar when you turn on the ignition.”

2.“The engine, when you turn on the ignition, springs into life with a muted roar.”

The first sentence has the subject “engine” and the verb “springs” close together. It makes for clear understanding. In the second sentence, the subject and the verb are far apart. It is not as clear as the first one. Use strong verbs. Strong verbs convey action. In the above example, “springs” is a strong verb. It makes you “see” what happens when you turn on the ignition. In the first sentence of this paragraph, “use” is a strong verb. It tells you straight away what to do.

Avoid passive voice.  Passive voice does exactly that. It makes your writing passive, sleepy, and lazy. Active voice gives your writing action, immediacy. Let us see an example; “He hit the ball hard with the full face of the bat.” In the passive voice, it will read as “The ball was hit hard by him with the full face of the bat.” The difference is clear. If we keep just these few pointers in sight when we write, our communication will be effective.
 

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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #1 on: December 20, 2011, 10:33:45 PM »







Super.




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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #2 on: January 01, 2012, 11:11:37 AM »



Very nice, helpful and interesting.



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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #3 on: January 18, 2012, 04:31:21 AM »




Solid advice here.






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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #4 on: January 19, 2012, 09:37:07 AM »
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Ditto



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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #5 on: February 24, 2012, 04:51:16 AM »



I paricular liked that graphic included in the original post. Adds so much more.




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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #6 on: February 24, 2012, 07:21:48 AM »









 
 
 
Write to Communicate, Not to Impress




2.      Brevity:  Be as brief as possible. This is insurance against nit picking critiques. The less you write the less chance you are giving critics to pick on you.






This is certainly true. The more you say, the more you open yourself to criticism, well-founded or ill founded.



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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #7 on: February 26, 2012, 10:49:35 AM »



Short, simple and practicable advice.

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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #8 on: February 29, 2012, 09:41:42 AM »


It always pays to revisit what we were taught in our early days.





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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #9 on: March 03, 2012, 05:38:18 AM »



Heavy stuff. Ain't clear ta me totally




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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #10 on: March 04, 2012, 08:51:18 AM »



These principles enumerated in the opening post of this topic, once learnt, remain a lifelong asset.

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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #11 on: March 04, 2012, 08:53:20 AM »



Seems the learning of these isn't a matter of concern to some. See Qalib's post.




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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #12 on: March 04, 2012, 09:36:06 AM »





Heavy stuff. Ain't clear ta me totally








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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #13 on: March 13, 2012, 05:36:54 PM »



Ah!    Would love to see some admonitions like this at plenty of places I drop by.   


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Re: The ABC of Communication
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I endorse this. A lot of places on the Internet need cleaning up



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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #15 on: April 04, 2012, 08:54:55 AM »



Simple basic steps, I am often bemused how so many among us manage to ignore these



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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #16 on: April 21, 2012, 06:18:24 AM »
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May be because everyone believes they already know all there is




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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #17 on: June 04, 2012, 10:23:30 AM »

 

When I was in school, the rule was “Write to communicate, not to impress”.




In my school, unfortunately the rule was "Write to impress, not to communicate".


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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #18 on: July 21, 2012, 11:14:50 AM »



That Graphic is so helpful in understanding this topic.




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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #19 on: July 21, 2012, 11:19:51 AM »
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That is why it is there, young lady.



By the way, where did you get this avatar, it is so cute . . .   :)









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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #20 on: July 21, 2012, 11:28:31 AM »
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Yes that little girl looks so cute, especially when she closes her eyes.



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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #21 on: July 21, 2012, 11:33:32 AM »


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That is why it is there, young lady.



By the way, where did you get this avatar, it is so cute . . .   :)






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Yes that little girl looks so cute, especially when she closes her eyes.







Thank you. It is an angel, it is gifted from heaven.  :)






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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #22 on: August 05, 2012, 07:21:19 AM »


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May be because everyone believes they already know all there is







That's true and sad. Many people think, they know everything.


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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #23 on: August 08, 2012, 04:38:41 AM »



Highly practical and valuable advice.




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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #24 on: August 14, 2012, 11:41:41 AM »





 

When I was in school, the rule was 甜b]Write to communicate, not to impress[/b]・[/size]




In my school, unfortunately the rule was "Write to impress, not to communicate".




Some teachers do stress elaborate language for its own sake.




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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #25 on: August 15, 2012, 12:05:44 PM »







 

When I was in school, the rule was 甜b]Write to communicate, not to impress[/b]・[/size]




In my school, unfortunately the rule was "Write to impress, not to communicate".




Some teachers do stress elaborate language for its own sake.







Yeah but I don't feel that's good.




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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #26 on: September 09, 2012, 07:11:52 PM »




These are very practical tips.



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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #27 on: September 15, 2012, 10:18:29 AM »



Short, simple and helpful.



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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #28 on: September 15, 2012, 06:38:00 PM »



Hardly anyone pays attentions to these simple rules these days.



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Re: The ABC of Communication
« Reply #29 on: January 25, 2013, 03:09:57 PM »
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They should be. These are easy and practical steps to improve writing skills.